Comments on: Short Story: Liquid Calling

By: josephdevon

josephdevon — Wed, 01 Jul 2009 00:30:54 +0000

Thanks Andrew. Glad you enjoyed it. Liquid Calling has always been one of my favorite stories.

By: Andrew Watkins

Andrew Watkins — Mon, 29 Jun 2009 23:40:25 +0000

“It’s not wrong. It’s very right. You know what you’ve been doing, Smith? You have been lying in a comfortable bed, but you’ve been tossing and turning all night long, absolutely unable to sleep well because all you can do is worry about what sound the alarm clock is going to make when it inevitably goes off.”

Wow, that’s a powerful punch right at the end. Well said and well played. I honestly never saw that coming, him being a Russian spy.

By: tammy

tammy — Fri, 21 Mar 2008 22:22:16 +0000

i really liked the story and loved the twist in it

By: Tammy

Tammy — Fri, 29 Feb 2008 22:24:17 +0000

This story was GREAT!!! I’m at work bored and needed a good story to keep me entertained and I am so happy I stumbled across this site. I read a lot of short stories and I haven’t been so enthusiastic about one in a while!! Awesome twist!! Will definitely be back.

By: Eric

Eric — Sat, 26 Jan 2008 23:06:18 +0000

Now that had a twist I didn’t see coming. Great story

By: Ivan

Ivan — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 13:52:31 +0000

Hi, my name is disman-kl, i like your site and i ll be back

By: Marcia

Marcia — Wed, 17 Oct 2007 21:46:41 +0000

WEll, I must be doing something wrong. I want to say how much I like this story but the reply never shows up. This is one of my favorites.

By: JReiner

JReiner — Thu, 19 Jul 2007 18:48:24 +0000

JD,
I really liked the story! Once it got going and past the set up, I liked the dark side of the story. I thought the information on fluoride on where it comes from and the associations were inspired and definitely made for a nice break at work : )