Comments on: Short Story: Black Eyed Susan

By: LS

LS — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 18:42:55 +0000

I really enjoyed this story. It’s magical.

By: Kitten

Kitten — Mon, 09 Mar 2009 20:29:56 +0000

I adored this story. It took me back to the summers when I owned the world while it kept me wrapped up in today and my kids. Keep writing, I’ll definitely keep reading.

By: Alex

Alex — Thu, 05 Feb 2009 07:33:06 +0000

flashback status

By: Alvaro Zambrano

Alvaro Zambrano — Tue, 07 Oct 2008 21:05:47 +0000

your story good and interesting I don’t read that much but I did like your story

By: betty

betty — Fri, 26 Sep 2008 19:07:06 +0000

i love your story,i just found your website an this is my first one and can wait to read all of them. Keep up the good work.

By: Margi

Margi — Fri, 23 May 2008 16:34:11 +0000

I just found your website today (at work) and loved this story. Can’t wait to read more. Great idea. Want to read your blogs, too.

By: Arielle

Arielle — Sat, 10 May 2008 18:12:09 +0000

Great story so sweet and sentimental but i dont know about short!!

By: KAREN

KAREN — Wed, 26 Mar 2008 15:15:43 +0000

So real, so sweet. I could picture him setting on that hood. I could almost feel the breeze and smell the country side. Makes me long for those simple pleasures of the senses. Including the first kiss.

By: Tammy

Tammy — Fri, 07 Mar 2008 19:03:43 +0000

great story, I’m always a fan or your writings and I like that this one took a different direction from the others I read before. The narrative is comical! Good job

By: mae

mae — Fri, 07 Mar 2008 01:48:14 +0000

wonderful work!
good luck!